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Critiques
The biggest downside to this photo is that it isn't sharp, the focus isn't where it should be. Using the f1.8 aperture may lead to interesting results, but not in this photo. Her right arm seems to be in focus, while her head should have been.
Then, I dont quite get the situation she's in. She's holding a guitar (the wrong way, she's unable to play anything) , looking away to something unknown.
The cropping is ok, a horizontal crop could have been even better. Maybe you could have added a little more saturation to the whole scene too, to make the green '
Both the setting and the model have potential. Keep it up
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