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in me, in you
i love my boots.

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:iconbdwfh:
This whole critique thing is new to me, so please forgive me as i fumble for words.

To begin, before I even saw the title of this piece, I felt immediate sorrow and disappointment, so I feel I must give you 5/5 for impact.

Composition-wise, I like how there is no need to include a face, as all the emotion is wonderfully expressed without it, allowing you to simply be absorbed in the moment.

The fact that this is a black and white image certainly contributes strongly to the overall somber mood. A good choice, I feel.

A beautifully executed work, congratulations. I look forward to seeing more from you. :heart:
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This picture is a mystery. I at it and I keep asking myself why the girl in the funny dotted boots is standing there in this big puddle. And then I imagine how the frozen moment becomes full of life. I imagine the girl jumping as high as she can, like she did in her childhood, before she lands in the big, wet, grubby puddle. The girl doesn't care about her clothes that are getting dirty and isn't afraid of slipping. She's just enjoying that perfect moment.
That's what the girl would do in my fantasy. Probably she (I guess it's you) didn't do that. :aww: Probably she just stopped there to take a picture. Maybe she was running to the camera after every shot and then into the puddle again. I don't know, it's just what I said: a mystery. But it's a mystery open for interpretation and that's what I like so much about your picture.
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:iconalembic-lynx:
nice chalky monochromatic tones with real film image tones like this were gotten with the great film developers like Edwals FG7 or Rodinol..or by adding a few extra formulary grains of Hydroquinone to the developer..Tjis image has the similar nice dark tone qualities in the zone system sense very nicely done !!!!

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~They say most of your brain shuts down in cryo-sleep. All but the primitive side, the animal side. No wonder I'm still awake.~
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I like her boots :D

And the black and white adds a nice affect to it ;)
Nice ^^


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"in your dreams, you can do anything.
but in reality, nothing breaks your fall."
- Markus Zusak

sun on your skin, all smiles
a star at your side, you fly
hands on the wheel, held tight
don't you let go, just give it time.

- Over It
:iconkaulitzliebe:
I want this boots! nice :)
:iconxxmizerable:
I wish there was no snow here anymore. D: Damn ND. Rain boots have this awesome cuteness about them X3

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Francis (L4D) hates: subways, hospitals, doctors, cops, lawyers, stairs, elevators, rooftops, vans, sewers, small towns, vampires, helicopters, helicopters, Bill, woods, water, planes, tunnels..

But he doesn't hate vests. :3
:icondryadwrangler:
I like it without a watermark, but I understand why you'd want one.

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Feb 12, 2009, 5:51:06 PM

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